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HAVE WE BECOME AT HOME WITH THE SUFFERING OF OTHERS?



With housing being scarcely accessible as it has been for many years, and the ever growing concern of degrading social systems in Sheffield - Homelessness is inevitably on the rise. When asked if , you , citizens of Sheffield see homelessness as a growing concern 94% said they believe it is, which begs the question, 'What are we doing to help?'.

At this given time it is predicted that there are around 1 million homeless people in the entirety of the UK, whether that be sleeping rough in doorways or struggling to find permenant housing solutions  rely on hostels and squats to offer some hope of security, safety and comfort all year round. Prior to the festive season of 2017 , as a community we outwardly appeared to take a derisory approach to those huddled in doorways begging for food or loose change - therefore showed little interest to procure a relationship with those most in need. In November 2016 , a number of homeless people rallied round to support eachother in developing a safe 'Tent city' from which they could build a caring community and branch out to other, more fortunate people via social media. This act of solidarity caused an online frenzy of people debating the effectiveness of the fund raising and resource gathering and others like yourselfs making extensive effort to pool resources either through direct contact with those at the Park Hill tent site or through food banks and shelters due to the hightened awareness of how tough life is through the winter months for those struggling to find shelter.

As high levels of unemployment continue to rise, Sheffield's housing problem continues to grow.It is widely thought that the lack of ability to pay or gain  social help rent is at the epicentre of the problem . 1 in 4 people experience mental health issues according to leading mental health specialists 'Mind' and this statistic as said by officials at Sheffield City Council  this is one of the primary reasons for the increasing numbers of entrenched homeless that are slipping through the already fragile system in place to support this. 

When asked , 100% of Sheffield residents said that they didn't believe that they had enough information and support to reach out and assist those in need in our own city - which I'm sure you will agree is a rather alarming figure.










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HAVE WE BECOME AT HOME WITH THE SUFFERING OF OTHERS? 

Over the past twenty years it has become harder and harder for those in need to access housing. This combined with the ever- growing concern of degrading social services in Sheffield means that homelessness is inevitably on the rise in the city. When asked if , you , citizens of Sheffield see homelessness as a growing concern 94% said they believe it is, which begs the question, 'What are we doing to help?'. 

At this given time it is predicted that there are around 1 million homeless people in the entirety of the UK, whether that be sleeping rough in doorways or struggling to find permanant housing solutions  rely on hostels and squats to offer some hope of security, safety and comfort all year round. Prior to the festive season of 2017 , as a community we outwardly appeared to take a derisory approach to those huddled in doorways begging for food or loose change - therefore showed little interest to procure a relationship with those most in need. In November 2016 , a number of homeless people rallied round to support each other in developing a safe 'Tent city' from which they could build a caring community and branch out to other, more fortunate people via social media. This act of solidarity caused an online frenzy of people debating the effectiveness of the fund raising and resource gathering and others like yourselves making extensive effort to pool resources either through direct contact with those at the Park Hill tent site or through food banks and shelters due to the hightened awareness of how tough life is through the winter months for those struggling to find shelter.  

As high levels of unemployment continue to rise, Sheffield's housing problem continues to grow.It is widely thought that the lack of ability to pay or gain  social help rent is at the epicentre of the problem . 1 in 4 people experience mental health issues according to leading mental health specialists 'Mind' and this statistic as said by officials at Sheffield City Council  this is one of the primary reasons for the increasing numbers of entrenched homeless that are slipping through the already fragile system in place to support this.  

When asked , 100% of Sheffield residents said that they didn't believe that they had enough information and support to reach out and assist those in need in our own city - which I'm sure you will agree is a rather alarming figure. This would imply that more needs to be done by the council to make people more aware of the things they can do to aid the homeless community. 

Unbeknownst to many , there are Multiple charities based right here in Sheffield which are aimed at supporting and improving the lives of those who as a result of unforseen circumstances have found themselves on the streets, The New Hope Food Bank for example. They work tirelessly alongside communities, Supermarkets and local primary and secondary schools to provide 'emergency food to individuals and families who are in short term crisis' -  For this to work as efficiently as possible, the food bank provide a prescribed shopping list to volunteers of non perishable items , once recieved they package them up and distribute them to those most in need . This selfless act of kindness provides substancial meals for those who may otherwise go without and has been running now seamlessly for some time even offering a helping hand to those who want to assist but dont yet know how - Giving guidence on their website and social media page to keep up with the ever growing demand.

All this is happening on our doorsteps but were we made aware?

The Sheffield Cathedral Archer project are also striving for the same excellence by providing similar food 'care packages' to support those sleeping rough, even the entrenched who possibly due to alarming mental health figures are those most at risk. For ways to get involved they too post regular updates on their websites and social media pages with sections such as 'what we are short of' and opportunities to give monetary donations , which ensures the money being spent is done so on practical things aimed at improving the lives of those most in need.

If you yourself are concerned about the wellfare of somebody on the streets it is important you speak out and contact directly someone who is onside to help:

The archer project - 0114 2636970 or email Cap.reception@archerproject.org.uk

The New Hope Food Bank - 07939950713 or email michelle@NewHopeFoodBank.org.uk

The sheffield samaritans - 0114 2724010

Shelter - 0808 800 444

and for specialist advice for young people

Safe @ last - 01909 566977